Several grammatical changes.  

    The word 'their' has been changed from the word 'there' throughout the entire poem.  

    Extra spaces have been omitted between ending words and their periods.

    The word 'life-force' has been changed from lifeforce.

    The word 'soul mate' has been changed from 'soulmate'.

    The letter 'I' is now capitalized throughout the entire poem.